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Lesson in Loyalty — Chapter 3

1. Opening Scene

A low winter sun cut through the narrow courtyard as Mara tightened the straps of her satchel. The town still slept, but the air carried the echo of last night’s argument—words that had become small, sharp stones lodged between her and Tomas. Today they would leave for the northern pass; today the pack would be tested.

2. Immediate Conflict

• Tension: Tomas avoided Mara’s eyes, answering only in clipped sentences. Mara’s attempt at light conversation met polite silence.
• Trigger: A leader from camp questioned Tomas’s decision to bring a third horse, implying favoritism.
• Internal stakes: Mara wrestled with doubt—had she misread Tomas’s loyalty? Was the extra horse a sign of divided priorities?

7. Decision and Action

• Resolution: Mara proposes a compromise—split the convoy: a small detachment diverts to assist the village while the main party presses on, escorted by Tomas.
• Execution: Under Mara’s lead, the diversion rescues survivors and secures extra recruits; Tomas’s group reaches the pass on time, avoiding the patrol.
• Symbolic act: Tomas offers Mara the extra horse’s strap—a gesture of restored trust.

The Five Levels of Devotion

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